Today's plot phone consultation reveals yet again how writers show a preference either for writing about characters over dramatic action or writing about dramatic action over character emotional development.
The case in point becomes obvious when I consider what I remember about her story from a 15 minute plot consultation earlier in the year. Back then, the concept of her story qualified as "high concept", the exotic world intriguing and thought-provoking, the journey exciting and full of conflict and tension and action packed.
I did not remember much about the protagonist other than she was tough and a rebel and likable. I remembered absolutely nothing about the second viewpoint character and even that there was a second viewpoint character.
During the consultation, this division between the development of the character and the action becomes even more obvious. Thanks to the writer's strength in developing the dramatic action plot and the exotic world, she can leave those go for now and concentrate on what could very well be her weakness (generally we shy away from tasks we don't feel we're very good at and gravitate towards those activities we feel we can excel at): character emotional development.
Good news is she's got a terrific story and the work she does with the characters and the theme have the potential to make her story truly great.
What's your preference? Writing about external dramatic action? Writing about character emotional development?
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Emotional Elements of Plot
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