Who Wants What?
Antagonist Stopping her?
Concept extraordinaire Jill Corcoran answers with this example:
SHOE STUD is a romantic comedy told from alternating pov of the descendants of rivaling shoe dynasties in which Steve, a kleptomaniac with a fetish for shoes, and Marnie, a shy college senior with only one foot, must be the first to find a pair of diamond-studded Blanka wedges or lose their chance at inheriting a sparkling new shoe manufacturing plant.
That one line says enough to intrigue and includes all three plot lines (with a hint of possibility for the fourth).
Will the wedges be found?
Who will find them first?
Ticking clock: who finds the shoes first and wins?
Character Emotional Development:
Steve: kleptomaniac with a fetish for shoes (gives a clear sense of his strength, flaw, love)
Marnie: shy college senior with only one foot (gives a clear sense of her flaw, backstory wound, strength)
At this point the story hinges more on the quirky characterizations of the point-of-view characters and less on a higher calling. If one of them have a goal of winning the plant that includes a higher purpose the thematic significance heightens.
Romance: Any story about a girl and a boy | a woman and a man always offers the possibility of a heart connection between them.
As the concept is written here, the whimsy of the tale is enough for your family, friends, agents, editors, readers to ask for more and thus satisfy the basic demand of a story concept.
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