Thinking about something is cerebral and is generally written in summary
Feeling something is visceral and is generally written in scene.
Track your story. How much out of body or in the head time versus how much in the body, experience time does your story encompass?
Use the Scene Tracker Kit to deepen each and every scene you write.
For more information, go to:
http://www.blockbusterplots.com/tools.html
